The narrative would benefit from more structure, especially towards the end, which feels loose and a bit preachy. |
Forgive me sounding preachy but the character in our neighbourhoods, heritage and iconic landscape will be utterly lost. |
To be honest, it's usually too preachy, straining to get across a point, like using a chainsaw to cut a string on your jacket. |
I rewrote it several years ago and when I went back to it, it had this really didactic preachy ending and it was just awful. |
We're just bashing around trying to do something meaningful, but not in a preachy sense. |
I think that makes my music less preachy and it also allows me to just talk about the regular things I go through. |